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Post  Sarah Seko on Fri Oct 08, 2010 3:08 pm

Why – From the days when I was an annoying four-year-old, curious as to why my older brother could stay up past 8:00 pm, I have attempted to understand the world around me. Why is simply the question of my life.

Whisper – I have always loved the onomatopoetic quality of the word whisper. You can’t help but whisper when you say it. It brings back memories of playing telephone in giant circles and sharing the name of my first crush in my best friend's ear.

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Post  elephantastic on Tue Oct 12, 2010 11:36 am

You are completely right about whisper! Nice choices in words Smile

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Post  jxl33 on Tue Oct 12, 2010 11:38 am

100% agree with Laughter

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Post  Admin on Tue Oct 12, 2010 11:40 am

Wonderful words. Perhaps we don't all share exactly the same experiences with these as you, but I can think of very similar run ins and it makes me smile. You did a good job at evoking memory without being specific or even pressing the reader to do so, I think.

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Post  MrX on Tue Oct 12, 2010 11:41 am

I still ask why all the time. One of my most used words. Completely agree with laughter

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Post  KenInGA on Tue Oct 12, 2010 11:42 am

Very good points. The way you explain them using physical examples of why you like the word and even memories associated with each word is fun and an EXCELLENT way to get the point across.

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