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Post  cbehling on Tue Nov 16, 2010 1:02 pm

I Hate:
Responsibility (to some extent)

I Love:
Being crazy
Doing something stupid
Not thinking for a few minutes

Attempt 1:
Precariously perched on the banister
Trying to get up the stairs
It’s harder to walk on that railing
And odd, to deal with the stares
It all started out as a challenge
But now it’s all about fun.

Attempt 2:
I loathe nothing more
than to sit alone in a room.
To stave off the insanity, I dream
of being somewhere else.
Or dream simply of something to do:
A bike ride, a movie with friends;
To build, to design, to create
something beautiful. From boredom,
I let grow these ideas. Anything
To get out of this room.


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Post  MaryShelley on Thu Dec 16, 2010 12:18 am

Don't know why these aren't quite jelling for you yet, cbehling. I like your lists but you don't have a lot of options since you hate only two things and responsibility not really. I think you might find a poem in the connection between the two choices. And let go of the rhyme if it's become a burden.


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